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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 10 June 2016

My Acrostic poem.


9/6/2016

My Acrostic poem.

Reading - reading can make you learn something knew.  


Educate - reading educate you.


Achieve - reading can make you achieve in your learning.  


Discover - you can discover something from reading.   


Ideas - reading can give you very good ideas.  


Nature - you learn different things about nature.

Good words - you learn many different good words from reading.

I have finnish my Acrositc peom it was so hard I am so happy that I finnish today

Friday, 15 April 2016

Narrative

This is end

Once my family and I went to Pak’nsave to get the groceries. Suddenly the ground began to shake then the ground splitted into two parts in the middle water came out.

It was so hard for me  to run from the dragon beast  I was so skead because there were thousands of different dragon beast they all started to eat nearly every one they ate my parents I got so angry that I wanted revenge on those beasts but they never returned.

This time it wasn’t the beast that killed evry one in Pak'nsave it was a beast a lion beast but this lion is not a normal lion the skin is thicker than anything. His teeth is sharper than a human's blayd. It can kill 10 mens in one strike. I was on a mission to kill the beasts I went to the cave there was Hundred bones lying on the ground.

I could hear the beast roar I went further and further and there was the beast eating my friend James. The beast saw me then roared it loudest the beasts breath smelled like like rotten bodies. I got out my sword out and we started to fight he used his teeth and I used my sword he scratched me on my face and I got affected and turned into a beast too.                  

Monday, 4 April 2016

Saint Patricks day

17/3/16


At Saint Patrick’s day Mass I was nervous and embarrassed that I might make a mistake during the Mass because I was a reader. I worried for nothing because I read smoothly and clearly. Afterwards, we had a Soul Friend feast which I was hanging out for because I love food and also spending time with my Soul friend, Etuale. My favourite food at the feast was mince and cheese pies because mince is my favourite meat. It is juicy, soft and easy to eat.Yum!
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We are learning to write using our personal voice. I used my personal voice in my writing when I described the mince and cheese pies

Thursday, 13 November 2014

All about me poster

This is my all about me poster. I learnt how to take a photo of myself and how to change the background colour. This is my first blog post.